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  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: The gift in their eyes

    Hey there Lifeofjay, This poem is touching and expresses an important theme in life that I, quite honestly, have never thought enough about, yet I now realize how true it ...

    Feb 8
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Don't yell - a poem by Juno

    Hey there, I wanted to start off by saying I loved your use of the anaphora "don't yell"! I think it really helped portray the emotions of frustration and such ...

    Feb 8
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: The I-Know-It-All Club

    Hi, Alwaysea! I love how comical your poem is, and especially how you always found a way to put the most incompatible words in consecutive lines. The one I found ...

    Jul 24, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Boxes Lie

    I know this poem was written a while ago, but I absolutely loved it, and this was one of the FIRST pieces of literature I read on YWS! Love how ...

    Jun 6


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