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Good job MisterWaffles. Yeah, I was completely bored when I did this. So I decided to just write something fun. So there you go. I tried to loosely base this ...

Yeah it probably would be better as prose. But I still liked this. It was a well done scene. Good job! :)

Yeah great job! You're a good poet! (Probably doesn't mean anything coming from me.) I really liked this though. It's my kind of poetry. And welcome to YWS! Haha! Good ...

Cool imagery. I read it kind of fast but it's really neat. Good ideas. I like it. (By the way... origami rocks. :wink: )

It has been edited finally and changed. Any critques are greatly appreciated! Thanks! :D

Ok, time for the big reveal. A FotN said... there is a secret behind this. It's a big joke. This was "written" be mostly me with the help of some ...

Hehe! Wonderful! I'm diggin' the troll. Nice rhyming. And I love the wittisicm. Good job! :D

There's a color used twice? There's blue Blue Jay but one is a color description and the other is the name of the bird... then there a white, a black ...

Fixed! And I changed some other stuff. Thanks FOTN!!! :D

I think you're getting the gold leaf part wrong... I figured I might have to explain this anyways, not many people know what it is. Gold leaf is the metal ...

Sorry to say, but the idea is very stereotypical. Nothin new to anyone. It's cliched... ugh I hate using or hearing that word but it is. I personally didn't like ...

Cool... I like it. There's not much to comment about on a three line poem but it's good. :D

I don't have time to read all of it... I see you have added on to it though. I must applaude you for your accomplishment! :D *claps*

Haha! I have never been in a relationship either RiverGirl. I was basically BSing it, off of dumb sappy movies I guess. And thanks who fate loves. I'm surprised in ...

it's awesome! too bad it's mostly gone now. happy turkey day!