yllufituaebroken

Let's start at the beginning, shall we? "Hold still and be quiet!" the soldier next to me hissed. A large figure ran past the building we were hiding behind. I ...

I really liked the beginning, and I really like the theme. however, some of your stanzas seem a little forced. Your word choices are marvelous, but you may want to ...

To begin, I really did like this poem. It flowed rather well and the theme is marvelous. I feel like I can relate to this in my own little way. ...

Love the theme and the execution. I'm not picky about grammar, so I wasn't really paying attention. I feel like the stanzas really grew on me, like with every one ...