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Hey Hunith, thanks for the constructive feedback. I'll make the changes you've suggested. On the issue of telling about the breaking into a bank, I didn't want to tell much ...

Everyone is a witch or wizard or magical creatures. There is no international statute of secrecy in this world. Everyone can use magic, they are all connected to the magical ...

Its a book on its own. Totally separate from the HP universe. Unlike HP, the whole world is united under one singular Ministry of Magic and there are other sentient ...

Thank you for giving a very constructive review. I'll make the needed changes. On the name Sherlock, there's no specific history to why his parents chose it. I just liked ...

Hey LordofLit, if you have the time, The Chalice of Life Chapter 2 is out

Hey hunith, if you have the time, The Chalice of Life Chapter 2 is out

Thanks for the review Pretzelsing, really appreciate it. I will try my best to make the changes you have recommended I do. p/s: I did not intend to write the ...

Thanks for the kind feeback. This was just a prologue and I'm still tinkering with how to go about with chapter 1. Hopefully I'll have chapter 1 out by the ...

Thanks for the feedback, I have made some changes to the dueling scene. If its not too much, could you read through it and tell me if its any better? ...

Thanks for the feedback, I'll try my best to improve.

Well this is indeed a tragic story indeed. I found the protagonist of this story to be wise beyond her age, as she knew much about the teachings of Taoism. ...

Thank you so much for the constructive criticism. You're not the first who have said that the prologue is too long or just has too much info. That's why I'm ...