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Re: Chapter One : The Canaby Sisters
Your story is great! But I have some advice. Split your paragraphs up, and try to fix the diologue. It was very confusing. other than that, you are VERY good.
Jun 7, 2008 -
Re: Catching Casey
I just edited alot, so everyone Please give me some feed back. Thanks to those of you who have.
Jun 6, 2008 -
Re: Catching Casey
Hey Guys! Thanks for the suggestions. I went back and edited it, and now it seems better. I'm new to this stuff, but I like how people can help others ...
Jun 6, 2008 -
Re: Chasing Rainbows Chapter 1 Revised
Very good story, I thought. This is one of the first ones I have personally read, and I am not disappointed. There were some mistakes, though, with the punctuation. Some ...
Jun 4, 2008 -
Re: Song of Shallow Waters Prologue: Ten Years Before
Your story is awesome! This is the first one I've read, and I really like it. I'm sure you've heard this over and over, but I think you should use ...
Jun 4, 2008