-
Re: *marked for deletion*
Hi! I havn't seen you before. Now, before I delve into the story, I'd like to tell you that the plot for this story is awesome. Now, there were alot ...
Jun 7, 2008 -
Re: A Broken Promise
Okay! I really enjoyed this story. I think it's cool how you took the dracula story and made it your own. I'm new too. So, I've got just a little ...
Jun 6, 2008 -
Re: Milboukia *Part I*
I love your story. I just have a tiny suggestion. When I read the first paragraph, I noticed it had alot of commas. You might want to fix that. But ...
Jun 6, 2008 -
Re: Dreamscape- Chapter 1
I have also read the prologue, and this story has got me hooked. You need to start on a second chapter. I will read that one, and the one after ...
Jun 4, 2008 -
Re: Dreamscape- Prolouge
I really like this story. Your character is pretty strong, and I adore her. This world needs some strong heroines, or heros, whichever you prefer. You said you just wrote ...
Jun 4, 2008 -
Re: Song of Shallow Waters I: The Sirens
Hey, I really liked your story! I've just read the prologue, And now you have went and got me hooked. One of the only things that confuse me is that ...
Jun 4, 2008