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Hi! I havn't seen you before. Now, before I delve into the story, I'd like to tell you that the plot for this story is awesome. Now, there were alot ...

Okay! I really enjoyed this story. I think it's cool how you took the dracula story and made it your own. I'm new too. So, I've got just a little ...

I love your story. I just have a tiny suggestion. When I read the first paragraph, I noticed it had alot of commas. You might want to fix that. But ...

I have also read the prologue, and this story has got me hooked. You need to start on a second chapter. I will read that one, and the one after ...

I really like this story. Your character is pretty strong, and I adore her. This world needs some strong heroines, or heros, whichever you prefer. You said you just wrote ...

Hey, I really liked your story! I've just read the prologue, And now you have went and got me hooked. One of the only things that confuse me is that ...