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Re: Removed #2
Oohh, I really liked this. It was sweet and very sad. JabberHut beat me to the mechanics of it. Lol. I really liked the 13th stanza of this poem. It ...
Jan 4, 2009 -
Re: Screa, For Halloween
Oohhh! Scary! I like it. :) Steve: One word run. Shouldn't this be... "One word. Run!" It sounds better and shows more emotion. Otherwise, I liked it. Good plot. I ...
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: Creep
Your diary entry was interesting. You just need to make sure you are putting punctuation in the correct places. I know that usually when you free write in a diary, ...
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: shattered glass
I really like your style of writing. She put on a sweatshirt, a striped purple sweater, a pair of jeans and sneakers, and quietly opened the bedroom door, fearing that ...
Dec 31, 2008
