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yasminahmed

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: the story from my point of view

    thnx guys this is really helpful emm no this is my first story and will i write any more i don't really know i understand that the poem needs lots ...

    Jan 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: (unnamed)

    i love it as previously said its short and to the point i also like your choice of the words they are unique unusual but they add a personal touch ...

    Dec 25, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: we us and our double side

    i love it it has so much feelings put there and i really like the topic keep on writing i wont comment again on the hoe issue

    Dec 25, 2010


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