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Thanks a lot! Your review was really helpful!

Thanks a lot!

Right after the first line!

Thanks for reading my poem, means a lot to me!

Thanks for the critique!

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!

Thanks a lot!

Thanks a lot! You'll get to know her name in chapter one, but only towards the end! Her powers aren't that great...just that, manipulating people's thoughts, actions and emotions using ...

Thanks a lot...:D

Thanks a lot Noelle! That's the whole point, the reason why this story is dystopian, everybody becomes a scientist. How strange. This scientist thing? This is what our protagonist figures ...

Hmm...ROBOTS? You'll find out in the next chapters...thanks for reviewing! Also I made some changes. Glad you liked it!

So, I've made some changes.

So, I've made a teeny-weeny change. Hmmm.

Wow...this is really cute and 'typical teen' ! I love it!

Thanks alot! And your metaphor was a great example! I'll do the changes and will hopefully clear the tangle through the 1st chapter...