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Italics=flashbacks “So what do you think about him?” Gregory said moving closer to me hoping to hear me over the pounding music. “Well, he’s sweet,nice,funny,and cute; but I wish he ...

(This is just a review of the first post) The beginning dialogue between the protagonist and her boyfriend in the beginning just seem so unrealistic for high school kids. Remember, ...

Sidenote-flashbacks=italics “Yes we have like 20 of them at home. The house smells like casseroles and if you haven’t noticed, so do we.” Shanna said with a smirk on her ...

i thought it was simple and cute. the scenes were intimate but i really didn't fell the love connection as much as i thought i should have. But overall it ...

I really liked the beginning and kept me reading. It was sweet but i feel that it needed a little more "meat" to it, if you get what I'm saying.