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  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Desire

    review :) this poem was wonderful! I could see every little detail! improvements I don't want to nag too much but there are a few thing that could be improved. ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Seven Sins In My Home

    review :D positive • this has a great plot • the descriptions are wonderful • I think that this deserves a like negative • the poem needs to be longer ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Twinkle Twinkle Little Spy

    hello :) review. positive points 1. The first line of this written work. 2. The connection between the character and the stars. 3. words are well written Improvement points 1. ...

    Jun 26, 2014


The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties.
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