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Re: Desire
review :) this poem was wonderful! I could see every little detail! improvements I don't want to nag too much but there are a few thing that could be improved. ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Seven Sins In My Home
review :D positive • this has a great plot • the descriptions are wonderful • I think that this deserves a like negative • the poem needs to be longer ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Twinkle Twinkle Little Spy
hello :) review. positive points 1. The first line of this written work. 2. The connection between the character and the stars. 3. words are well written Improvement points 1. ...
Jun 26, 2014
