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I don't understand why you are all against him. Name 5 specific things that he plagiarized and from what book/movie. I don't have five - but I once read an ...

I like the concept of vampires in Blue Bloods more than I like anything else. Why? 1. I've never heard the concept of reincarnation for vampires before! Seriously -- way ...

- Douglas doesn't seem to be hauling himself from the couch with his arms or legs, just standing. "Pulled" just doesn't seem to be the right verb. - "Tidbit" isn't ...

Wonderful. I didn't realize at first what you could be alluding to - and when you finally reached that point, your metaphor suddenly hit me in the face like a ...

Just for the record: all those "simple"s at the end of the chapter/section should be "simply." I find your opening sentence odd, as a reader. I had to read it ...

Nice. A little overcomplicated - I'm assuming that this is a baby speaking, and I doubt a baby would use the word "Mother" - but comforting, because of the repetition. ...