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WoW! This was really good. I liked it a lot. It was weird in a mysterious creppy way but i enjoyed reading it :)

Heyy... Just wanted to say this overall has a good flow but, (im sorta going off on what Amelia said) you really should try to get the 2nd and 4th ...

Well, I enjoyed this one but im not really sure i get it. I mean, I really dont understand the story or the point really. And i dont like the ...

Wow this was really good though you might wanna add some periods here and there but other than that i luvvved it and this is a great metaphor.

This was really great and i enjoyed reading it! (:

i luvved it keep it up xD

i luvved cant wait 2 read more