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Hi, Laure! As far as I know, perpetrate means to commit. So I don't think I've misused the word there. It seems that odour and odor are the same? xD ...

Hi there! As you mentioned, I think that it's quite confusing as well after reading it a second time. The second line was indicating that after she slept for four ...

Well, thank you for the review. I appreciate it a lot. I tend to have this problem where I keep repeating 'she'. I try to avoid the repetitive 'she', but ...

Haha, hi there! Honestly, I'd like to say that you give really great advice in your reviews. I appreciate them all, and I'll improve on the next one. "Azure pair ...

Thank you for the kind review! :) I actually wrote a really long description about the dog. But then I went back to some of the past reviews I've received ...

Hi there! Thank you for the kind review. Yeah, I was kind of expecting a lot of corrections in this one. I was delaying it so long that it had ...

Haha thank you! I really appreciate the advice! I will correct it immediately, thanks for pointing it out. :) Your lovely review means a lot to me. Once again, thank ...

Thank you! I guess I've made a mistake on the chair one. I'll improve it the next time. Thanks for the great advice, although I'm not quite sure whether my ...

Haha, this is extremely clever! Although I am not that fond of poems, I have to say that this is good. I have no corrections to give, but it might ...

Thank you so much for the advice! It really helped me a lot. And yeah, I do know that I have to improve on some of my technicalities. This was ...

Hi Laure! Thank you so much for the advice! This was the advice that I really needed coming from an experienced writer. I will try my best to improve more ...

It is simply beautiful. I love this a lot. It might be one of my favourite. Although I'm not much of a fan of poetry, I have to say that ...

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it :)