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brass: thanks for the suggestion :) the paragraph with the 'she's' have been anonymously terrible so i will get right on that. thanks for reading!

To Jet: thanks so much for ripping me apart! :) no really, it was very helpful! i was unsure about how a lot of the grammar was supposed to be, ...

sorry, ive never heard of it. though i would say if you're interested in it, go ahead and read it.

thanks so much! i was a little worried about my first post- you never know what people will think! :) i actually have a lot more on this story but ...