xXTheBlackSheepXx

Hey there! :) Some of the other reviewers said they were confused by this, but that wasn’t the case for me. If I’m getting it right, she’s being held hostage ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS :) My story involves the group of 9, and proves just how oblivious humans are to what really happens in this magnificent world. I didn’t ...

This was quite short; I think you could’ve added another page or so to this introduction. It’s hard to critique something that hasn’t even had enough time to really get ...

Hey :) I hope you don't mind a longer review this time. I figure since we're nearing the end of the story I can start making more comments about it ...

Onto part 3! :) It was a dream, only a dream. He thought, urging himself to believe it. there should be a commas after dream, not a period. An hour ...

Hey there, sorry for being so late to your request! I can tell you put a LOT of thought into this, so I will be as honest and helpful as ...

I just had to come back for more XD Her features were sharp and cat-like, her eyes cunning and intelligent. Her hair, white as a lamb's fleece, was cropped short ...

His eyes were cold and black like steel. A merciless glint in his eyes masked his face How would a glint in his eyes mask his face ?. His hair ...

Smiling slightly to myself, sure my plan would work, I settled comfortably into my seat. I had some miles to cover before rolling in my success Now there are several ...

It was a sunny day in St. Petersburg, Florida, a Thursday to be exact and most kids were in school that day. Except me. I was boy of average height, ...

I agree with Mizz’s review. She pointed out all the errors I found, so I’m not going to repeat them. You should probably go back and edit through all her ...

He opened his eyes and reached across the floor blindly until his fingers touched furs, and then soft, warm skin. He looked up to make sure she was still there ...

Hi! Here to review :) The night air has a way to seep into the darkest parts of you and help bring them out in ways unimaginable to the human ...

Jeremy and Aniline were outside the gate. “Are you sure about this?” he asked her, stroking her hair. “ Y es.” Her heart was shuddering inside her chest, making her ...

Hi there! :D The sting of infection and fester boiled in the lashes and gashes that marred his back, shoulders and chest. comma after shoulders. Maybe you should say infectionS ...