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I personally like poems with as little punctuation as possible, so I was happy with this :) Truthfully, it was very good, and although it is simple, it also felt ...

Hey again, Suki :) I did your review a while back and saved it, and by that time you've already edited it, so sorry if some of this stuff doesn't ...

Hiya :) Ross Taylor His face was relaxed, but there was something about it, no comma that made me uncomfortable. Something that hadn’t been there before. Something my mind had ...

Hey there :D I hated school. There were too many of them, ghosts I mean. Always hovering around me and trying to drain me of energy so they could do ...

Chapter 12 WOOT WOOT!! ... '... The Sky Diviness has become too powerful,' Rauma stated as she leaned back in her throne, 'Every day her League grows in both quantity ...

Heylo again :) The girl brushed her hair from her forehead, flopping back onto her bed, trying to erase the nightmare’s brutal images from her mind with no luck. Pulling ...

Calypso and Adonis whirled around to face the woman in the doorway. "Aphrodite!" Calypso cried. Her heart started pounding wildly. "Hello, Calypso," The goddess said with a smirk. Calypso did ...

I started down the road after classes had ended, not sure where I was going. I wanted to talk to Jamie, but she was gone. I couldn't find her anywhere. ...

Athena's silvery loom clicked back forth. Calypso sat Indian-style on the bed, waiting for Athena to start the story. "The blind poet Homer once told the story of the Odyssey. ...

I could see my breath when I exhaled. It was the white transparent color that always makes it seem as if an unknown life-force has just left your mouth. It ...

We all knew that Marco was going to be put to death. Most of us knew anyway. With the only exception being Marco himself, everybody else was curious to see ...

Would've that been so hard? Would that have been so hard? The kid in the wheelchair is the most interesting thing in this story so far. The whole real estate ...

He could see the wind playing with her skirt almost carelessly. I’m not a fan of your opening line. It’s just not interesting enough. Liven it up with something original ...

For all those fatalists out there wondering what the end of the world will be like, here’s a hint: it’s boring. Dead boring. Out-of- my your -mind-with-boredom boring. Yep, this ...

I seemed to have forgotten how to scream. I could see that these two men were a threat, but I couldn’t utter a sound; I just stood there. I wondered ...