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This is definitely my favorite drawing I've seen from you :) I can tell you put a TON of work into this and I think you've really improved a lot! ...

This is a good character description, it makes me want to read more about this person. Her personality definitely seems entertaining, and her character design is well thought out and ...

Back for another chapter :) Love was now shouting profanity directed towards Ava, her face red from the effort. "It's your entire fault!" she screamed, her face now turning purple. ...

Hi! I always get stuck on titles myself, so don't worry too much about that x) I'm sure one will come to you in time! After 5 miserable months, it ...

Hi again ^_^ I really appreciate the updates you PM me, it gives me the budge I need to actually review xD I'm always excited to see a new chapter ...

I really enjoyed this ^_^ It was a lot of fun to read, and I enjoyed the playful chemistry between Jane and Riley. There were a lot of little moments ...

Definitely interesting :) I'm reading through this so I have some background for your cover contest, but I hope my reviews can be of some help, too! I think the ...

I really liked this chapter. Peter seriously creeps me out, and he looks just as menacing in my head as Prince did x) In this chapter, I found a lot ...

Hey again! I'm pretty happy that I've been able to keep my promise of a review every week xP Alright, so I loved the chapter. I’m really glad you gave ...

I loved this chapter too x) My favorite part had to be the scene where Prince was shattering the bottles of liquor and then took out the match. The was ...

Two fire-haired men, one lanky and the other massive, drink from chipped mugs, trading jokes and roaring with laughter. The giant rubs his hand across his bald head. His crude ...

I don't even know how to critique this. i just wanted to say that it made me feel something powerful :) And that's all I ever ask of writing. Every ...

Hey I'm back for chap 1! It’s large, it’s true, and slightly crumbly, but that’s normal in old houses. what does 'it's true' mean in this sentence? I summoned his ...

“You can’t stop what should this be what’s? coming.” John wakes. He does not rise in fright with weapons drawn. He opens his eyes slowly and takes in the smoldering ...

It was the silent hour between midnight and dawn, and , no comma though the foxes, snakes and comma rabbits had settled down to sleep, the aroma wafted its way ...