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Hey Scify! Sorry it took so long to reply, I got kinda swamped with exams last week xP But I can't wait to finally start chaps 2 and 3 ^_^ ...

I have to also say that the opening with the sign was awesome ^_^ I followed. Randy continued to stare. "For a spawn of the underworld she sure has got ...

I finally got to finish this :) A Despite this story being about a guy who's slowly dieing of cancer, I can't help but smile through the whole thing because ...

Hey Wolf, I'm really glad you entered this piece into the contest! I'm here to review for you. I like how you separated this into three different sections, that made ...

I like what you have here. I love vampire stories, so this was cool x) I really can't wait to see what happens to this girl after she is changed. ...

This story is so entertaining :) It's funny, but at times there's just that note of seriousness that really can be very powerful. I think just about everyone has known ...

I saw the description for this novel and I was intrigued when I read that it took place in Hinamizawa, which happens to be the name of a town in ...

Hey! The title reminded me of Death Note so I thought I'd review ^_^ The ground beneath my feet is cruel; it slows the tread of my feet, aids those ...

The voice that answered him was impossibly deep; it sounded like soft thunder. “I have lived here for many lifetimes. Watching. I have seen love, that which humbles and impassions ...

There is no sound in the great dark ballroom, but for the slight swish of elegant evening gowns, the quickened breathing of dancers, and my pounding heart. The black subterranean ...

I was just going to give this a 'like' because all the nitpicks have already been done, but I just wanted to say that this was really powerful for me. ...

Hey :) I love the first stanza. The beginning of this poem flows really well! I like the concept of the middle of the poem. It has a 'do you ...

Pavo wasn’t all that surprised when he woke up. However, he was absolutely puzzled as to the fact that he was still alive. I’m not quite sure what you mean ...

Pavo woke with a start, the now-familiar pain digging into his arm. It perfectly accompanied his gritty eyes and aching back. I don’t really get how pain can be the ...

Hey Mike! I really like these lyrics :) I think the song tells the story (well, of history) in a very impacting way. My favorite part was the very end ...