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Re: Poetica.
Maybe it's just me, but it seemed like you tried really hard to be... well... random in this poem. It's like you wanted to be different or something. Nice wording, ...
Jul 4, 2005 -
Re: Falling
Normally I don't like choppy poems -- they seem... forced. But I really liked this one. I liked the last two lines: "Only tunnel / No more light". I didn't ...
Jul 4, 2005