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Re: Two Gay Poems
On a law that reads That two men can get married This seems a bit awkward, but reading it over it doesn't seem as awkward. Maybe because the last two ...
Nov 9, 2009 -
Re: Following Your Heart is Hard To Do
First off - nice story, I liked it. Sorry that it's based off a personal experience though. Nit picks - ‘Yes! I would love to go out. I really like ...
Nov 8, 2009 -
Re: My Dream
Nice! For a seventh grader that is pretty good. :smt001 It has a nice rhythm and I like the rhymes in it. :) I hope you like my review, because ...
Nov 8, 2009 -
Re: Goodbye Winter, Hello Spring
Wow, awesome story. I got into it immediately, it like.. pulled me in. The title of the story is good also. I cried when she was leaving his house; :cry: ...
Nov 8, 2009 -
Re: Flames
Awesome story. I almost cried at the ending. :oops: :cry: :lol: I am very sensitive when it comes to this stuff.. Anyways, it's a good story. I found a few ...
Nov 8, 2009 -
Re: The Runnaway Friends
I agree, it was rushed. And, don't use abbreviations like NY, spell it out. Use imagery so readers will get drawn in and can see it in their heads.. The ...
Nov 8, 2009