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lol thank you! yea it was pretty rough but thanks for reviewing it :P and colour is spelt colour with a u in England, not without lol. are you from ...

chapter 2 coming up! Ive decided to split it all up and i did write this rather fast and it has had no editing, so please dont be harsh!

Thanks! Its good that you don't hold back lol, and ill take your advise. This wasn't really supposed to carry on this piece, i was experimenting and because im new ...

Thanks! But seriously i wanted it to say "i never wanted to die" because she is writing this from the dead, to her love and she says "our love was ...

Thank You for your reviews, er, again! Just to let some of you know, i wont say names, is that i am fifteen yes and criticism is always hard to ...

Thanks for your advise! This poem was just something i wrote, still needed improvement and im glad you reviewed it. Its basically me being confused about life and not really ...

thankyou :D im sorry i made you cry! *gives tishoo* the poem isnt the best i dont think, it still needs work so when i get some time ill try ...

Thanks, im still learning, i only wrote my first poem a month ago lol, and i have real trouble trying to make them look neat, they are still so raw ...

thankyou so much, but when you said i should put "i never wanted it to die" no because the girl who is the narrator is dead and she says "i ...

thankyou so much! I was playing around with this poem for a few weeks, just in notebooks and stuff and i wasnt sure it would really come to anythng. i ...

Thankyou so much for your reviews! yea it was so difficult to do this, dragged up some old memories :? lol but im happy with the result. Ill try and ...

lol thanks :D :P

So cute! i really liked it, just the sort of poem a girl likes to hear :D

is it too long?... lol i duno, can someone please read it all and tell me what you think?

lol thanks, the story is a bit random and when you do read it you might not get some things as it is unfinished - thanks for your nice reviews ...