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Re: My bittersweet blueberry waffles
I never told anyone how much i cry every night so I could smile for you the next day. i think that is one of the most heartwarmimg things i ...
Sep 22, 2008 -
Re: Love.
I liked your peice, but i kind of have my own view on love.... confusing, that is the only word that i could describe it. If we all had the ...
Sep 22, 2008 -
Re: My story.
a similar thing also happened to me, it must be so common... i was just thirteen but i was so besotted in love with him that i just wanted him ...
Sep 22, 2008 -
Re: Open Your Mind
I loved it! I love it where you say about its the indipendant thinkers that changed the world, not people who follwo the crowd. I totally agree. The only thing ...
Sep 22, 2008 -
Re: They Laugh.
I liked it, it was a bit confusing... i didnt eally understand it untilli read your little note at the top. It says on here that before you put poems ...
Sep 22, 2008 -
Re: LeMar Chapter 1
It was good, i so wanted to read more but it seemed to be over so fast! i thought aswell that it was a high school shooting thing, but i ...
Sep 22, 2008 -
Re: Time
I love it, it was so true, non of it was a lie :D it was written really well, and it has so mcuh meaning behind the words, they are ...
Sep 22, 2008 -
Re: Deleted
woa that was scary! it kinda reminds me of The Ring lol but it was still awesome. i think it needed more description though. What did Pandora do when she ...
Sep 21, 2008 -
Re: Every Angel Has To Fall Prologue
I really liked it, though it was a bit confusing going from one character to the next in such a short space of time. I still lived it though, it ...
Sep 21, 2008 -
Re: random beginning of a story here
I thought it was magical - for your first review - of course it has potensial! are they mad? It was brilliant, beautiful and i could picture it so clearly, ...
Sep 21, 2008 -
Re: Fallen_ Preface
That was amazing, i loved it, i could picture it so clearly in my mind bythe way you wrote, you should be really proad of yourself! I liked the added ...
Sep 21, 2008 -
Re: Nonsense poem!
That was so good! i loved it, i loved all teh funny words you used :P i didnthink it was that confusing, it made sense to me :D lol love ...
Sep 21, 2008 -
Re: Forever always
aww this poem was so sweet! i would definately be happy if someone i loved sent me this lol, it was short but sweet, and the best poems are always ...
Sep 21, 2008 -
Re: Questions
I liked it, it was different but I spotted a few spelling mistakes as I was reading. Spell checker is always useful in times like this lol It flowed very ...
Sep 21, 2008 -
Re: I Love You
i loved it, ve never read anything like this before. its so passionate lol you must really be in love, i think only people who have actually felt love like ...
Sep 21, 2008
