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Hey there! I'm guessing that, from your custom title and name, you're a Fall Out Boy fan? *High fives* They're awesome :) On to the review. There sure is a ...

Hey Jas! I really am enjoying this story. The wording is great and it seems to be flowing along quite nicely. The only thing I'm still unsure about is how ...

Hey Jas! So there's not much that I can really say without being repetitive, but I just wanted to comment saying how much I'm enjoying this story. The tension that's ...

Hey there icy! This was short and full to the brim with emotion. I liked the descriptions you used, and the way you worded her feelings was great, too. I ...

Hey there! I've decided that I really like your writing. Both pieces that I've read by you have been great. They flow well, the characters are believable and they keep ...

Hey oddkid! Sorry I haven't been following this as closely as I would have liked. Life got in the way, but I'm here now! Being away from your writing and ...

Hey there! I think this was great. The way you desribed things was lovely, and the way you portrayed her feelings was very believable. It wasn't too 'woe is me,' ...

Hey there! First off, welcome to YWS! I hope you have a great time here :) I think this was a great idea for a story. You have a good ...

Hey there! The first thing that stuck out to me while reading this, is that you have a bit of trouble with your punctuation. Rosey Unicorn wrote a great post ...

Hello again, Spark! I enjoyed this part just as much as the first chapter, so good job! The other reviewers seem to have done a pretty good job of pointing ...

Hey there, Spark! I'm here as promised :) So okay, I liked this. I've always wanted to write a fantasy story, but I seem to lack the ability to come ...

Hey there! but its hard to be optimistic The only nit-pik that I think didn't get caught is this - 'its' should be 'it ' s' Okay, so this was ...

Hey there! I really liked this. The twist at the end was good, although I was mad and sad that Lily betrayed Arthur. I mean, she knew he was going ...

Hey there! I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to get to this. I mean after you were so gracious as to let me spend the night Comma after ...

Hey there! Why am I falling and no one else is? I loved the imagery here. It really was great. I think, however, this sentence could be better. Maybe if ...