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Re: For the Unseen - Two
Hey Ashley =] Thanks for the PM :) Once again I really enjoyed reading this. I still think your writing flows brillianlty and is easy to read. I like how ...
Apr 18, 2009 -
Re: Redcap #1
Hey =] I enjoyed reading this :) I don't think I've ever read anything of a similar concept before. This piece is a little too long to nit-pik properly, so ...
Apr 17, 2009 -
Re: Untitled ch 3 part 1
Hey =] I'm really sorry that it's taken me this long to get around to reviewign this, but I've had a bit of a crappy week :( Nit-piks first; 7:45 ...
Apr 17, 2009 -
Re: So You Want To Rule The World?
Hey =] I really should be going to bed now as I have to get up at 6:30 for work, but I couldn't log out without saying how much I ...
Apr 14, 2009 -
Re: 'Electric Dreamer': Chapter One: Amber
Hey Lisa =] I'm here as promised :) So...I really enjoyed this and I think it's a great start to a story! Nit-piks; “One, two, one, two, three, four!” - ...
Apr 14, 2009 -
Re: Worthless
Hey Megan =] I enjoyed reading this, though the concept of it was really sad. As I lay on the cold, hard floor, slowly drifting into unconsciousness I looked down ...
Apr 14, 2009 -
Re: For the Unseen - One
Hey ashleylee =] Wow. I thought that this was beautifully written and it didn't seem like a rough draft at all to me :) It flowed well and I think ...
Apr 14, 2009 -
Re: Those Little Glass Slippers (7)
Hey Sela =] You get my 100th review :D Now. I couldn't really find any nit-piks, so I have nothing to point out, but I really wanted to say how ...
Apr 13, 2009 -
Re: Standardized
Hey =] Here as requested, though I must say that I'm awful at reviewing poetry :( I've never been able to write it, so I'm useless at telling a poet ...
Apr 13, 2009 -
Re: Night visitor part 12
Hey Pippie =] Thanks for the PM! So, you want advice? I'll try my best :) Nit-piks first; Once Esme had come to the decision it was safe to, she ...
Apr 13, 2009 -
Re: Diary Of A Teenage Distaster 4
Hey Megan =] Thanks for the PM! Nit-piks first; because I've been doing some research. I've been doing research on the angel of hotness and his gang. - I think ...
Apr 13, 2009 -
Re: Dreams of Giants -- Chapter Two, Part Two
Hey yrclever =] Thanks for the PM! Once again I really enjoyed reading this. Your writing is so easy to read and it flows really well. I like how you ...
Apr 13, 2009 -
Re: There's This Girl
Hey =] I love the way you wrote this. It's a great way to make the reader feel more involved in the story. Your MC seems pretty relatable as most ...
Apr 13, 2009 -
Re: Mystic
Hey Mia! It actually didn't take me as long to get to reviewing this as I thought it would. So...Rosey and yrclever seem to have picked out all of the ...
Apr 12, 2009 -
Re: gone
Hey =] You've been following one of my stories so I thought I'd take a look at this for ya' Nit-piks first; “Janie, wait up!” “Come on Sara.” “Janie, I’m ...
Apr 9, 2009
