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Hey Yoda! It's been ages since I reviewed anything of yours, so I'm glad to be here to take a look at this for you :) 1. Nit-piks - He ...

Hey! My cat is called Spike :P I'm going to take a shot at reviewing this for you :) 1. Nit-piks - As I'm writing this it's raining. I think ...

Hey Skins! I liked this chapter. We get to see Zoey in a new light. She no longer just seems like the quirky girl whose sister died. Now we see ...

Hey Lauren! I thought this was brilliant :) It was a nice change to read a romance story that doesn't contain the usual fluff that most romance plots possess. You're ...

Hey Shrubbery! Have you posted some of this story before? Only I swear I made a note to myself to review it but I never got around to it. But ...

Hey! I couldn't find anything that hasn't already been pointed out so my review isn't going to be very constructive. I'm just writing to say how much I loved this. ...

Hey StoryWeaver! I thought this was pretty good for someone who doesn't write romance very often :) 1. Nit-piks - Sunlight melts from the sky to form puddles on the ...

Hey Shortasaurus! I'm going to take a look at this for you. 1. Nit-piks - She just knew. She felt it deep down. These two sentences kind of say the ...

Hey! The other reviewers already pointed out the main factors that I had problems with - such as the punctuation - so my review isn't going to be that constructive. ...

Hey! I think you have a cool idea for a story here :) 1. Nit-piks - shoved inside a dusty draw. 'draw' should be 'drawer' that you experienced during your ...

Hey Butterfinger :) I'm going to take a quick look at this for you! 1. Nit-piks - Her body lay broken and bleeding on the sandy foothills; crumbled in a ...

Hey Mikko! I'll go through the nit-piks first and then I'll give my overall impression :) 1. Nit-piks - Women cried with their children clutching their sides over the dead ...

Hey jasmine! I loved this! It's just so true - the amount of times I've wanted to gauge my eyes out because an author has made everything so cliche, is ...

Hey smashles! So I saw this and wondered why it rang a bell in a far corner of my brain and then I realised that I'd reviewed the prologue :P ...

Hey! I liked this. It was a good piece for only being an experiment. Can I ask what you were experimenting with - or is it blindingly obvious and I ...