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Hey there thatoddkid! As always, as with all of your writing, I enjoyed this. Your grammar was great and the piece flowed with such ease that it really was a ...

Hey there Smurf! I got all excited when I saw you'd posted this :P *Has no life evidently* But this story is sooo good :) I knew I wasn’t sharpest ...

Hey there! I think you have a pretty sad piece here. The nit-piks I were going to mention have already been caught, but I still wanted to point this out ...

Hey Jaymee! I think this piece was good. Your descriptions were nice and they really helped to express to the reader how scared the MC was, even though it all ...

Hey there UV! I read the original version of this earlier today, and I can really see the improvements you've made to the piece after reading this version too. I ...

Hey there Ty! I admire how quickly you produced a piece for this contest. I got my emotion three days ago and I'm still having trouble finding a song :P ...

Hey there! I think you have a pretty good story here! You seem to have followed the prompt you got well, and the story was enjoyable to read. I couldn't ...

Hey there Yoda! I'm here as promised :) I liked this short story. You followed the prompt you got well and it was easy and enjoyable to read. I do ...

Hey there! I think you did a good job on this. It was original and that made it all the more enjoyable to read! I liked the way you described ...

Smurf! I'm so glad you've posted this! I was beginning to think it would be months before I'd hear from Charlie or Zoey again. I didn't spot many nit-piks, so ...

Hey borntoshop! First off I want to say how much your writing has improved since I first started reading it :D I could really imagine what was going on here ...

Hey there! I think this story was brilliant. I liked your descriptions and the way you used the '“But pain is the only way to receive the wisdom of the ...

Hey there! I don't know how you got on in the contest, but I certainly liked this. The ending was so sad. I guessed that he was almost going to ...

Hey reagan! You get my first review with my shiny new reviewer two badge :D Anyway, I think this was a nice little story. Not much happens, but the way ...

Hey there reagan! Seeing as you were nice enough to review my contest entry, I thought I'd pop by and have a look at this for you. Now, I'm awful ...