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Hey PrincessOfDarkness! I'm glad you posted this. I enjoyed reading it :) So, I don't know if you want any nit-piks or not, seeing as you wrote this a while ...

Smurf! I really don't know why you're so worried about this. You need to stop being so paranoid and start believing in yourself. *Said in a Mum style voice* :P ...

Hey Tinny! Thanks for letting me know this was posted :) I have to agree with Charlie in that this story really has caught my attention. I'm really enjoying the ...

Smurf! I'm glad you decided to post this early :) that I was, I did exactly the same in response. This would be better without the second 'I' climbing up ...

Hey otherone! I'm always happy to read and review a piece of your writing, especially since you always do such an awesome job on reviewing my work :) So, nit-piks ...

Hey there! I didn’t understand. I was ... I was on my street! How? Somehow, nothing made sense. Everything seemed unrealistic and blurry. I looked at the scene around me. ...

Smurf! I love you for posting this part. I've had a bit of a crappy day today, but seeing this up made me smile, so thanks :) being tucked in ...

Hey there! I agree with the reviewer above in that we don't know anything about the MC or the guy that she's just split up with. All we know is ...

Hey there! I think this was brillaint. I was a little confused at first, but as I read on I started to understand what was meant by the title of ...

Hey there Icy! The title drew me in straight away. As for your MC, she was okay. A bit too plain at some points, but as Waywardbird said, it was ...

Hey there! I myself didn't go to university, so I never had the pleasure of filling out forms and applications. I have friends who did though and this poem of ...

Hey there! I'll be the first to admit that I'm not very good when it comes to reviewing poetry, but I'm using the 'shuffle' button today and this popped up. ...

Hey there! I know you said that this isn't finished yet, but even so I think it's great. I love The Pretty Reckless, so I tried imagining it as one ...

Hey there littletinfish! I read part one just now, but you already had some great reviews so I thought I'd have a go at reviewing this part for you :) ...

Hey! I don't have time for a very indepth review, but I wanted to point out the time inwhich your story is set. You write the dates 1987 throughout, yet ...