wunmi

Thank you for the review. I realize I don't use as much punctuation as I should.

no i realize it as the wrong story its supposed to be for the story "the sky girl" but my wi-fi is currently high on burnt rubber fumes( which my ...

hello world.

Your welcome. You're really talented and you should keep writing. The first thing I did when I read your poem is follow you even before the first comment I wrote. ...

I love your poem. It is so passionate and heartfelt that I can't help but be drawn to it. I would continue to tell you the who, what, where, how, ...

I think it's amazing. DO NOT feel the compulsion to rhyme so many poems on this site do so it nice to see a difference.

This is a strong poem though i don't think the rhyme is needed at all. i feel as if it took away from it's emotion. i do feel like a ...

thanks for the review. Its really raised my confidence bar a bit higher. i as kind of nervous putting this up

Thanks