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I like this! It's a good concept and I like the personiphication of fear that you made from the begining to end. The first verse: "Something is knocking the window ...

I really liked this! It was vivid just enough so that you let the readers mind see what they wanted to see, while at the same time we saw what ...

Though I'm not really sure I understand the point of the poem, I really actualy liked it. It was very smooth and reminded me of the silly poems I would ...

I could really feel the terror the little girl went through from the begining to the end. You captured her character really well and it made the whole piece really ...

This is pretty good! I liked the part when you said, "Remain in the domain of similarity." It flowed really well. While I read it I could sense the feeling ...

I like this. I found it a bit confusing but I can see the potential that the story holds. I was hoping that you would explain it more in detail ...