writewannabe

Yes it's been a while since I posted any works, and am not sure if I like this new look at this page. It was difficult trying to post my ...

@KikiSaysRAWR! I reedited this with your suggestions and also found a couple more that you missed. When I originally wrote this, Maria was just a robot moving along doing everything ...

I think with all the grammar and punctuation mistakes that you did this on purpose. It makes the story even more absurd.

I had the same experience when I tried to shoot a bow. Was never good at it. Even that running scene is from my own experience. I ran on the ...

Hey PuffCherry, cute name, the reason why you didn't find many mistakes was most of the typos were pointed out. But you will probably find them in the other chapters. ...

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Lol! We must always be on at the same time. Thank you for your comments. I originally had Johanna killed off. But when I was about halfway through Nano I ...

Thank you. I will work on the editing. This was a story I wrote for Nano 2009 and am sure there are mistakes I could not find. The only thing ...

Note: If you read this chapter and then go on to read the next Chapter 3 Part B, bear with me since I didn't get a chance to edit that ...

Not bored from writing it. I just wish I could be on this site a lot longer but I work and try to do 50 hours of stuff into a ...

I made corrections as the reviewers suggested. I also worked on describing the setting. Thank you everybody for the feedback.

I got this edited and hope to get feedback.

That has potential. specially if the old an is a bum residing at the airport.

Plus in a way it is something like an allegorical fantasy story to compare the biblical prophecy of the end of the world. There is a supreme ruler, people died, ...

I don't consider this to be spam at all. I just happened to like the image but no, I have not seen this one, as far as I know. I ...