writer_ally_reader

wow. I thought that was really good! I liked it a lot. It has a nice flow to it from beginning to end. I really felt the powerful emotions of ...

hi..... I thought this was very good! i liked it a lot. I like the part where it says: I don't care about the fashion because I've got my own ...

Okay.... I thought the actual story was okay but you made some mistakes i am going to point out..... You repeatedly spelt the word desert, as dessert. but on a ...

Over all i liked it! short and sweet poems about normal everyday things usually bore me but this was OK! It sends out a pretty positive message and makes you ...

That was absolutely amazing!! definitly continue!! i thought that you got the characters exactly and it seemed exactly like the actualy twilight( i mean like the writing style and how ...

I liked it. I think it needs more description though. Since it is short you have to make every word count. Choose your words carefully and use them to paint ...

That was good! I liked the descriptive similes and metaphors you used. It did sound a lot like the scene in eclipse. Maybe try to come up with a scene ...