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Re: Ascent Chapter 4
Well, I read the previous chapters and saw they had plenty of reviews so I decided to give my best critiques to this one... or so I originally thought! This ...
Dec 7, 2015 -
Re: Dream Sequence 1/5
Wow this was so cool. I definitely didn't see any of it coming. My only problem was that your descriptions were kind of blah. I know that when you're throwing ...
Sep 4, 2015 -
Re: Rise of the Fallen: Chapter 1.1 *Revised*
Wow I really love this!! To my surprise I didn't find any kind of flow patterns off or any grammar errors. Than again I might just not have read it ...
Aug 23, 2015 -
Re: Chapter One - The Rogue
Well DeepCrystal already mentioned the few grammars errors that I found so I won't be picking at that in this review. I would first like to say that I love ...
Aug 23, 2015 -
Re: The Ghost & The Prodigy: Ch1 + Ch2
Hey! I really liked this. Normally I'm not much for this type but it was definitely interesting and kept my reading. I like that you're really descriptive and that I ...
Aug 21, 2015