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Re: Paradise..?
Hey!! What's up? Oh my, do we have something here! All right. Let's stars off with general comments--story-wise comments, to be exact. I really enjoyed the fantasy behind it all. ...
May 19, 2016 -
Re: Miss Fortune
Hey, there! Wow, this was quite entertaining and easy to read. I really like the thing you did there with the names. One of the things I've learned from my ...
May 19, 2016 -
Re: The Torment of Life
Hi! Soooo, I thought about returning the favor since your review brought a smile to my face when I read it earlier today. This is certainly something, and I'm really ...
May 19, 2016 -
Re: Another Smoke
Hey, there! I've never been really involved with flash fictions like this, but you made a really good first impression. I really liked how I immediately went to, "She's smoking ...
May 14, 2016 -
Re: Losing her : chapter 1
Hi! Holy crap! You just slapped me with pure emotion. Like, I click on your story and then BAM, before I can even tell what's going on, a handful of ...
Jan 30, 2016 -
Re: The Devils Right Outside
I'm so speechless that even typing something feels wrong. (Hey, there! hahaha, I had to get that out of the way before I even thought about properly saying hi.) I ...
Jan 30, 2016 -
Re: Erased Prologue
OH. MY. GOD. Okay, first of all, hi! Second of all, goddammit! That was epic and intriguing. Like, at first, I was conflicted at how the guy missing a tooth ...
Jan 28, 2016 -
Re: Subaquatic - Chapter 1
Hi! Um, so, this'd be way better if I actually knew how this site properly worked, but I can always try, can't I? I should probably start by stating the ...
Jan 23, 2016
