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I don't think its cliche!! What may make people think that is because its a little sing songy- but I think thats what make it great! I love you message ...

very nice! I love all three lines of it!

Thank you so much! lol sorry I actually copied and pasted the wrong poem, my final draft has all of the commas and grammar errors already mentioned. I was actually ...

Hey thanks so much! Yea, I'm having a bit of trouble with some of those rhymes, they don't seem to want to come out right. I really like your suggestions, ...

I like how mysterious it is, I'm a little confused on the symbolism....But I think that it has a kinda repentance to the narrator, like he's been tortured by some ...

I think its wayyyyy funny! Poems are a heck of a lot more fun to read when there funny like that! Thanks that just totally made my day!