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wordsandwishes

  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: made up

    This poem's so awesome! It's majestic and creepy at the same time. I love your unique style and ideas. The flow was a bit choppy, but it didn't ruin it ...

    May 28, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Missing

    It's a good start, and it left me asking a lot of questions, maybe too much. It didn't really answer enough questions to let the reader know what they're actually ...

    May 28, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Nightfall~ Prologue

    Hi, I've read the other reviews and I think they've covered most of your mistakes, but I'd like to shine the light on what's good about the piece. I like ...

    May 28, 2012


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