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Re: made up
This poem's so awesome! It's majestic and creepy at the same time. I love your unique style and ideas. The flow was a bit choppy, but it didn't ruin it ...
May 28, 2012 -
Re: Missing
It's a good start, and it left me asking a lot of questions, maybe too much. It didn't really answer enough questions to let the reader know what they're actually ...
May 28, 2012 -
Re: Nightfall~ Prologue
Hi, I've read the other reviews and I think they've covered most of your mistakes, but I'd like to shine the light on what's good about the piece. I like ...
May 28, 2012
