wonderwitch

Well, I was certainly aware that this story is going to be a comedy by the end of this selection, even if it has not yet been absolutely shown that ...

Actually, I rather liked the lack of exposition. You manage to weave enough relevant information into the narrative for the reader to at least grasp the events, even if the ...

Hmm. Sounds like a giant game of Capture the Flag to me. You have a pretty solid basis for a story here and I think you have a good idea ...