wolfgang87

thanks for the review! If you were really wondering, the line "I brought this one on me." is referring to the fact that the panic attacks were caused by me ...

Good job! I would suggest breaking up your stanzas so they flow together better. Well done on remembering periods. I also suggest capitalizing the beginning of each stanza and commas ...

That is quite deep and inspirational. The comparison was spot on. Or shall I say stripe on. I enjoyed the analogy but you could easily take it deeper. Seize the ...

Very good! It made me feel as if it were all happening around me. Just a thought on the title. When I saw it I wasn't sure what to expect. ...