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  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: The Hunger Games

    I don't have a favorite book, but if I did, the Hunger Games would definently be in the top 5! But on the subject of Peeta or Gale... I can't ...

    Dec 11, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: First chapter of book :)

    Hi Sophia! Welcome to YWS! I'm Wolf and I'll be your reveiwer. Ok, so what I first noticed when I started reading is that you went a little over board ...

    Sep 1, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: The Hunger Games

    September 1st... so close... Ok, here's my plan for reading Catching Fire: since it comes out on a Tuesday and my week is too busy for me to really sit ...

    Aug 29, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Shadowdancer's: Legend of the Queen ( Prologue )

    Cool! A Warriors fanfic! I was wondering if they would have one of these on here. I believe that TaylaChase got all the nitpicks, but there was just one thing ...

    Aug 3, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Amazing Books

    In no order: Maximum Ride by James Patterson Harry Potter by JK Rowling Percy Jackson and the Olympians by Rick Riorian Warriors by Erin Hunter Pendragon by DJ McHale The ...

    Jul 28, 2009
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: The mystery of my quick maths exit

    Yikes! I would feel so humiliated if that happened to me. Probably because I'm typically quiet and don't like to be in the spotlight. I feel so sorry for you. ...

    Jul 27, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Firestorm

    Hi again! So far, so good. :D As far as I can tell, your spelling and grammar are sound. (Which isn't very far) I'm really liking your dialogue. It sounds ...

    Jul 27, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Firestorm

    Hey Sugarbowl! I'm not seeing much of a plot yet, but it still has potential. I like the descriptions you used in Scotts dream at the beginnig, although I did ...

    Jul 22, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: ~Raining in February~

    Ooo Mysterious myseteries... Anyway good job with the descriptions of her brother, very vivid and bright. I know that this is only a prologue but I'm curious to learn more ...

    Jul 16, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Experiment - Chap. 8

    Once again, great chapter! You keep dragging me deeper and deeper in to this story. Anna Graham is right, you definently have a grasp on the human mind. I like ...

    Jun 29, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Experiment - Chap. 7

    Hey KJ! Wow, this has got to be your most intense chapter yet! I could feel my heart pounding as I read this. I can't even imagine how I would ...

    Jun 26, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Experiment - Chap. 6

    Oh My Gosh! Why can't this be a book so I can just turn the page! Ug! Great cliffhanger by the way. It was great, just like the rest of ...

    Jun 24, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: I Need You To Write. - 7.

    Oh my gosh! I absolutly love this! You left such a cliffhanger at the end of this chapter and I'm DYING to know Alonsa's story. I just love a good ...

    Jun 19, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The End of Time Chapter Two (Part B)

    I agree with Karsten, you went a little overboard on the descriptions. They were good, just repeated and over done too much. You have a good idea here and I'm ...

    Jun 18, 2009
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Final Game

    Hm... definitely unique. Though there are some things I need to address. The main character, is it a boy or a girl. And what does he/she look like? Also, it ...

    Jun 18, 2009


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