wish123

Thank you for your honest review. It is a relief that you have interpreted it as I intended. Your critique is valid and I will make sure to fix it. ...

I really appreciate your review. Thanks :)

Hi. Thank you so much for your feedback. If you don't mind, could you tell me your interpretation of the ending, or the base story line? It might help me ...

thank you so much. Your review is quite motivating :)

I agree with the others. Your premise is strong and could be developed into a great short story. I'll just review and apply some techniques to make your narrative more ...

Yup, just edited it now.

This was before the edit, I changed it haha :)