winters

A little short, but with a solid story. There wasn't a whole lotta room for the plot to be glimpsed at but it's a good intro. It seems to be ...

It was good. I can see the lack of description as plot teqhnique for introducing the events of the prologue in later chapter. If the soldiers and scientists aren't especially ...

Pretty good. There are a few spelling/grammatical errors(such as 'where' instead of 'were') but otherwise was very well-written. If you're going for a heavy military theme, you might want to ...