wilsonsimpkins

huh ive been wondering about that its just that so I need to describe more than what he is feeling thanks.

I'm impressed with the worldbuilding and attention to detail here. you really brought your story to life here, great job with the magical girls and great job with your protagonist. ...

So after reading this I have to say your attention to detail and structure is excellent. I'm currently trying to write something similar and I have to say this has ...