wilsonsimpkins

thank you

thanks

wohaaaaaaaaaaaa i see by the chapter title someone is a fan of metal gear. anyway great contrast between father and daughter is great here.

each word is right on the spot and beautiful, well done. great job with the horror aspects of it as well. the sheer terror you produced in 10 paragraphs was ...

SWEET HOME ALABAMA no joke this was an excellent read. the fight club scene made it all the more enjoyable to read. the gory combat made me ecstatic more so ...

SWEET HOME ALABAMA no joke this was an excellent read. the fight club scene made it all the more enjoyable to read. the gory combat made me ecstatic more so ...

violence, sadism, yes. the third story of yours I have read today and it is wonderful. you did a great job portraying the emotions and an even better job describing ...

violence, sadism, yes. the third story of yours I have read today and it is wonderful. you did a great job portraying the emotions and an even better job describing ...

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this is your best work yet. the combat is executed perfectly and the lines are better as well. although I had no idea what the story was, is it part ...

this again is beautifully written the way you described combat really painted a great picture mentally and the quick snappy dialogue further enhanced this. although the lines were a bit ...

this made me cry man, I've been sitting on my ass for a few weeks now and I did not know what to do, if this interaction was awkward, how ...

also also its for a fandom called azur lane