wilsonsimpkins

each word is right on the spot and beautiful, well done. great job with the horror aspects of it as well. the sheer terror you produced in 10 paragraphs was ...

violence, sadism, yes. the third story of yours I have read today and it is wonderful. you did a great job portraying the emotions and an even better job describing ...

this was another well-written story, with very good attention to detail and a great example of horror done properly. I really enjoyed the way you painted a picture with your ...

this is your best work yet. the combat is executed perfectly and the lines are better as well. although I had no idea what the story was, is it part ...

this again is beautifully written the way you described combat really painted a great picture mentally and the quick snappy dialogue further enhanced this. although the lines were a bit ...

this is a beautiful piece of writing, I think you did an excellent job of describing the mind of a killer. the way you described detail was in-depth as well, ...

as someone who is currently struggling with this, I must say this is beautifully written. you perfectly described the frustration and hopelessness of writer's block. the rhymes are beautiful, however,

goddamn I'm hooked and can't wait for the next chapter. you've done well, the action and the sheer terror in this scene are masterful. It's good that the view of ...