williamwordsworth

I like this but am confused by what you're writing about? Can you tell me?

I like how you wrote this, the suspense and the dark. Gripping. A bit confusing though, especially the end bit, just the way you worded it, I had to read ...

I really understood what you were saying. With all the bad out there, it's nice your still looking for the good. I can definitely relate. Nice poem. (:

I would love to see more of this. I love Harry Potter humour! A great read.

Spelling mistake; The tackled the man and saved her life Only fault I could find. Really well done.

I absolutely love this peom. It's beautiful. I don't really have anything to say. It's beautiful. I already say it but it deserves to be said again.

You might want to go over it with a fine tooth comb to check for spelling mistaskes. And i love how you decided to spell Hellena, with two l's. (;

what are you don't amber? i presume that's supposed to be what are you doing? you might want to change that.

absolutely beautiful

WOW. i really loved this. beautiful.

this is lovely