wildwildcat

Thank you for the review! wildwildcat

Thanks for the review! As for the whole tense issue, I am going through the enitre work to edge the kinks out. Reminding the reader of Desmond's injury and his ...

Well Desmond is a guys actually, but the part where he jumps in to save the woman's son is impulsive, and you suggestion of the thought is really great for ...

Hey, I'm here to comment on your work so far: Your writing is a little, for lack of a better word, ethereal. Events flow from one to the other, quickly ...