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  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Hell of a time

    Wow, I really like this. It caught my attention right away. It was really moving. lost one of my friends to a house fire, not the same thing, but it ...

    Jul 11, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: It's Complicated Chapter 1: Best Friend or Boyfriend

    Hi there, I wanted review your chapter. First thing is, that maybe instead of putting "...." That down when Rose says nothing, you should say something like I didn't know ...

    Jul 11, 2013


I was flummoxed by fractious Franny's decision to abrogate analgesics for the moribund victims of the recent conflagration. Of course, to display histrionics was discretionary, but I did so anyways, implicating a friend in my drama to make the effect cumulative. I think a misanthrope would have a prosaic appellation, perhaps one related to autonomy and the rejection of anthropocentrism. I think they wouldn't think much of the prominence of watching the coagulation of tea to prognosticate future malevolent events, not even if those events were related to jurisprudence.
— Spearmint