whitewolfpuppy

I'm sure you will improve greatly! It was amazing for your first try. :)

Thank you so much! I tend to wander off on my tenses a lot. Thank you for pointing those out for me. I don't catch it most of the time ...

No problem! Totally understand where you are coming from. :) Keep on writing!

Sorry Alpacalypse! I don't know poems... I suck, ha-

Oh! I don't know poems very well... It is not really my thing! I'm sorry! >.

No problem! :D

Oh no xD ha- I will think about it. I like writing it this way but I will add the detail of the candle's thoughts and what not. This is ...

Actually... The girl is not my main character. The character is the candle. That is why the thoughts are processed as well as it should be. You know what I ...

At the beginning for what I said, I said it because I couldn't find the same website I used. that is why the spacing is different. It is supposed to ...

Oh I could be wrong about the hyphen thingy. Sorry!

You are welcome! :D

Hahaha! That is a scary book! xD I stay clear from that book and people who might read it... It is very scary xD Though you can post your book ...

Oh boy ha- Well I am ready for anything! :D I'm going to wait to review the third part til tomorrow. I think I can handle it, ha- I wish ...

I am a bit, ha- I know I sound crazy. >.

Alright, sorry about that. >.