white_velvet_on_a_moonlit

Well, personally, I don't like rhymes, they annoy me, but maybe I can help you with other aspects of your poem. First off, think about your beats, syllables, whatever you ...

My interpretation: The narrator is closed up and not letting him/herself love anyone because of something that happened in the past and to make it all better again he/she needs ...

You really have a deep connection with yourself. If that make any sense :D What I mean is that you can describe yourself so well. In your poem you have ...

I really like the last few lines: " Drenched in memories dyed in deep purple, Will I be able to see my true self In your eyes?" . . . ...